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Post by NovaStorm on Feb 12, 2015 17:34:16 GMT
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Post by PlatinumSun on Feb 12, 2015 20:35:07 GMT
YAAAAY!
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Okay, round 2 now.
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Post by knightofbalance on Feb 14, 2015 0:13:40 GMT
Thanks guys. I was actually nervous about this one because it was my first free verse poem. I actually left something out in line 7 so now it's fixed. I wouldn't mind if you put this on Datacore too (Sits down after reading both poems) Damn me, PlatinumSun. I've- The only thing I can compare with your poems are Beowolf and The Divine Comedy. Ever think of becoming a poet, because you're more than qualified.
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Post by PlatinumSun on Feb 14, 2015 3:25:49 GMT
Thanks guys. I was actually nervous about this one because it was my first free verse poem. I actually left something out in line 7 so now it's fixed. I wouldn't mind if you put this on Datacore too (Sits down after reading both poems) Damn me, PlatinumSun. I've- The only thing I can compare with your poems are Beowolf and The Divine Comedy. Ever think of becoming a poet, because you're more than qualified. ... I'm not sure, but I have considered it as a possibility. I do appreciate the complement though.
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Post by pearlshippingarmy on Feb 15, 2015 14:49:24 GMT
AWWW, THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL! *dies of fangirling*
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Post by SakuraBlossom on Feb 16, 2015 3:54:58 GMT
Wow. These are beautiful poems. Well done!!
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Post by PlatinumSun on Feb 16, 2015 5:58:49 GMT
Awww thanks you two!
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Post by PlatinumSun on Feb 17, 2015 19:44:47 GMT
I started this one before the last one and didn't finished this until just now. I feel iffy about this and it's in Dawn's perspective. I might redo this, maybe, I dunno Memories
You traveled around to many places Always meeting brand new faces But have you ever looked behind you Do you ever think about me too
Do you remember how we would laugh and fight And then work together with all our might Do you remember the tears we cried From that dreadful goodbye
You were the tissues to my tears And would take away my fears You would always give me joy You kind-hearted boy But now that you're not here It's like I don't care My dream that was there It disappeared into thin air Everything has changed Since our last exchange Nothing will be the same Oh what a shame
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Okay, round 2 now.
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Badass Punchline: Some choose to destroy. Others choose to create. Some aid the light. Other ally with darkness, As for myself, I walk the line between the two.
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Post by knightofbalance on Feb 19, 2015 23:15:57 GMT
(Speechless) This kind of emotion is why I read.
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Post by icypiplup on Feb 21, 2015 4:11:11 GMT
*stares at poem for 746 hours* How do you write these poems?!
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