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Post by Nesh on Sept 10, 2017 22:26:27 GMT
That's not even the worst of it if events in Kanto continue on without Ash on schedule Charmander dies.
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Post by chosenone151 on Sept 10, 2017 22:32:59 GMT
God, you're right... Yeah, let's just assume things are completely different.
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Post by Nesh on Sept 10, 2017 22:35:17 GMT
I could do that, but that seems like a huge stretch of the premise.
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Post by chosenone151 on Sept 10, 2017 22:36:33 GMT
I suppose that's true... I'm not sure then haha. I hope you come up with something.
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Post by pearlshiper on Sept 11, 2017 11:43:20 GMT
No mean to offend, but on the line:
"Consider it an apology for the mean stuff I said. Dawn explained.
i noticed he ending quotation mark missing. Just noticed while reading and felt like pointing it out.
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Post by Nesh on Sept 11, 2017 17:12:45 GMT
I'm starting to get a feel for what Pokémon I want Ash and Dawn to catch. I think I'm going to end up giving them different Pokémon than they caught originally, though less so Dawn compared to Ash.
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Post by chosenone151 on Sept 11, 2017 21:19:46 GMT
Sweet! That'll give us something different to look forward to.
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Post by Nesh on Sept 12, 2017 0:02:14 GMT
Now people are asking me to slander Kenny.
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Post by chosenone151 on Sept 12, 2017 1:14:20 GMT
Man, I really wish reviewers would stick to talking about a fic's content. That's not fair to you lol It's also unprofessional to inject your biases into writing like that.. Sorry you've already got that pressure lol
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Post by Nesh on Sept 12, 2017 1:21:08 GMT
They PMed me just to ask that. I'm not going to do it of course. I might be tempted with Iris but I wouldn't.
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