Sinnoh Trainer
Posts: 880
OTP: Pokeshipping
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
Badass Punchline: Hello fellow pearlshippers!!!!
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Post by Nafsika on Nov 11, 2017 10:30:14 GMT
Hey I'm back!
I read the new chapter and I have to say that I was kinda disappointed of how small it was! I wanted more and also why you didn't reveal with whom he's going to battle next? Something sneaky is in the air!
Ok enough with the complaints time to get in the good stuff! I liked how Ash used Croconaw dancing skills to battle! It was really fun! And I called it first that he will evolve in that battle! Fairaligator is a real beast when it comes in power! I'm glad he knock out Electravire!
I also loved the battle between Venusaur and Meganioum! The best moments were those that showcased how their different moves canceled the affects of their moves and turd it to a phisical battle with Meganioum be stronger and more experienced!
As for the last battle Gardevoir vs Typhlocion was also really good and showed both Pokémon and their bond with their trainers! It was really good and till the end you had us in the ropes especially when both were paralized but Typhlocion still manage to pull it through!
Besides the battles the moment that Ash scold Max and try to make him realized that win or lose doesn't matter if you see it as an opportunity to have a good battle and even better moment with your Pokémon! Really mature from Ash if you think how he reacted in his first loss! And the last scene in which everybody cheered up Max was really nice!
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Post by chosenone151 on Nov 11, 2017 16:59:34 GMT
Welcome back!
Yeah, splitting this one up made it a bit short, sorry! And I just wanted to change up the formula; not have the same thing happen every round, you know? It'd lose its impact.
Thanks, yeah! You had that pegged down. And he really is great!
Thank you! Yeah, it got really brutal haha
Good! Building up the suspense is fun; I enjoyed that battle too. But Ash was just too strong for him!
And that scene was so fun to write!! It's fun to have Ash snap and be brash once in a while, especially for something like this. That scene is the honest truth though; I find it hard to imagine being in Ash's position, tournaments would bug me out for the reasons he described haha!
But Misty said it best; Ash is unusual.
Thanks! Look forward to what comes next!
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Sinnoh Trainer
Posts: 880
OTP: Pokeshipping
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
Badass Punchline: Hello fellow pearlshippers!!!!
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Post by Nafsika on Nov 11, 2017 18:32:10 GMT
Thank you! It's nice to be back!
No problem, I was a little surprised that's all! I still enjoyed it! And the battles were more intence than the first part in which Max lost half of his team so easily! You balanced it really well, especialy if you think how experience Ash is! He could have wip out Max and the battle have finished in a few minutes! No that way was the best!
Let's pretend that it wasn't a pure coincidence my guess, ok? And I will love to see him in a contest he will be great to show of his dancing skills in a crawd that can appresiate them!
Well both had a lot to prove! So it was a battle perfect for grass type Pokémon! Not to lady like battle but still a good battle!
Well you're a master in that! Yes but you didn'tmake it easy for him! That ability was a nice trick of Max's part! He played Ash really good in the end although he lost!
Well, with Ash's lost ratings positive thinking and learn whatever you can from all those experiences, is the only thing that make it easier to keep up! I don't know if I could keep insist to reach my dream like Ash doing, is really exhausting to not achive your dreams!
And I have to agree with Misty! And for that we love him!
Oh I can't wait!
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Post by chosenone151 on Nov 24, 2017 23:39:32 GMT
Hey, I'm back! Delivering the message late, but chapter 83 has been uploaded, and Ash has started the semi-final round! His opponent is a character you should all be familiar with if you've played the games, or watched Chronicles.
There's a bit of pearlshipping in this chapter too, so look out for that!
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Post by chosenone151 on Dec 6, 2017 2:01:31 GMT
Hope you guys are still around! Because the show must go on, and chapter 84 is up; and the conclusion to the league's semi-finals, with it! Dawn's going to be cheering hard, as Ash and his Hoenn team go all-out!
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Post by chosenone151 on Dec 26, 2017 16:12:52 GMT
Chapter 85 is here! A day before the league finals, Indigo League Village shows it knows how to party, and so do our heroes! Ash and Dawn sing their hearts out at the talent competition, with their public premiere of High Touch! And Ash and Pikachu sing some nostalgic tunes of their own! Check in on the fun, with chapter 85!
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Post by chosenone151 on Jan 4, 2019 2:36:26 GMT
A little late for updates inbetween, but Chapter 96 is ready and uploaded! If you wanna see the Grand Festival in its entirety, I recommend you catch up, because this is the finale! www.fanfiction.net/s/11351431/96/Another-Road
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Post by ketchumash on Mar 2, 2021 6:25:48 GMT
Do you know? Your fanfiction is just amazing. I was literally addicted to it for some months!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Mar 3, 2021 16:05:24 GMT
Thank you so much!
I didn't even know this forum was still active. But I'm glad you've enjoyed it!
I actually have news; I'm planning on giving Another Road a reboot! Splitting the same (or a similar) narrative into several smaller stories; I'm part of the way done with the first!
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Post by auda on Mar 4, 2021 18:18:44 GMT
Whoa, that's great to hear! Admittedly, I have not yet read it, but this fanfic is one of the few that somehow made it's way to my attention without me even trying to look for fanfics at all. I'm not sure how exactly, possibly the fanart that came along with it? --Which, from what I've seen, is amazing! I've heard nothing but good about the fanfic itself, so I can't wait to check it out in the (hopefully) near future! (trying to completely catch up on the anime before getting into anything else) Anyway, keep on keepin' on!
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