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Post by chosenone151 on Sept 14, 2017 18:35:15 GMT
Hey there! I'm pretty good, thanks! Haha that's great! I can't wait to hear from you guys. Looking forward to hearing your impressions!
and thanks, Maotelus! I really enjoyed writing that last battle, especially the middle of it.
And I'm glad you're excited for the next battle! I've already got it planned, it should be a blast.
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Post by chosenone151 on Sept 26, 2017 4:12:18 GMT
Chapter 79, 'At Swords' Points,' is up on fanfiction, now! Enjoy Ash's fourth round battle, and rest assured, you'll get to see some pearlshipping here, too!
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Post by Nafsika on Sept 28, 2017 8:02:28 GMT
Hi guys!!!! Oh new chapter!!! Awesome!!!! I hope this time Ash to face some difficulties because in the previous battles nailed all his opponents and their Pokémon!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Sept 28, 2017 14:31:47 GMT
Check it out, and you'll see! You won't be disappointed.
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Post by Nafsika on Sept 28, 2017 15:58:01 GMT
Ou that sounds really promising!!! I definitely will read it!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Oct 10, 2017 4:41:50 GMT
Chapter 80; The Rivals, is up! Two sets of friends will face off, today. Two friends whose bond is fresh, and two that are bound by time and nostalgia.
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Post by Nafsika on Oct 11, 2017 9:42:40 GMT
Hello everybody!!! I'm back!!!
So I read the wen chapter and it was really good!!! The first scene was nice, I like how Ash, Ritchie and Himashi hung out and have fun!!! But I have to ask why Dawn is never with them??? They will have made a great quarteto!!! I have to confesse that I thought that Max and Koda's battle will be one chapter and Ash and Ritchie's another, but it was a nice surprise to be on the same chapter!!! I had the feeling that you would made Max to win so he could battle Ash!!! The battle was really good and I liked that till the end it wasn't clear who's going to win!!! And I laughed really hard when Ash made fun with Max's mistake!!! And I also have to say that Max cockiness it's really funny!!! I can't wait to see their battle!!! As for Ash vs Ritchie was even better!!! Ritchie has worked and trained his Pokémon really hard!!! I like that!!! Bulbasur with Sparky was really tough battle!!! I didn't see the draw coming!!! It was really interesting to see that they're equal to strengh!!! But I have to say that the battle between Happy and Wartortel was even better!!! Especially I liked the scene in which Happy use Sleep Powder and Psychic and Wartortel had been affected a little bit but Ash made him snap out of it!!! And the trick Ash came up to win this battle was really awesome!!! I think that Wartortel good well and with Charizard but it wasn't his battle!!! And the best part off this chapter Charizard vs Zippo!!! I loved it!!! I liked how Zippo had at the edged at first Charizard but then Ash turned the match thanks to Charizard's willing to win this battle!!! And the moment that Ash spoke telepathic with Charizard was really cool!!! Generally a great chapter!!! I can't wait for the next!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Oct 15, 2017 16:26:52 GMT
Thanks a lot!
Well, it was originally going to just be Ash and Ritchie, actually. But, since Himashi is there with him, we didn't want to leave her out.
Nope, they had the same theme of friends having it out, so putting them in the same one made sense! And yeah, Max's cockiness might come back to bite him!
Well, I wanted to give Bulbasaur and Wartortle the respect they deserve, especially after their battle with Paul early in the fic! And the loss to Happy in their first battle was crap; sleep doesn't mean a KO! That battle was written to make Ash lose lmao. So I wanted Wartortle to have a proper comeback and overcome Sleep Powder.
Wartortle's very strong, but he's not beating Zippo; at least, not in that state! I think Charizard was the one for the job. I could only see Pikachu beating him otherwise, honestly.
Thank you, though! Any match with Ash's Charizard being serious has to be intense! It seems they've trained about the same, over the years, but they were more determined to win and move on!
We'll be seeing another important battle, soon!
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Post by Nafsika on Oct 15, 2017 16:57:48 GMT
We're really back!!! Ah it's going to be so much fun!!!
Ah ok!!! It worked anyway, but you know what I want to see Dawn and Himashi to interact!!! They still haven't a moment just the two of them!!! That will be really awesome!!!
Ow that make sense!!! Still I really love their respective battles!!! They had the right degre of intensity and mystery!!! Till the end you weren't sure who's going to win!!! Really good!!! As for the Max something telling me that he find his master and things won't turn the way he's imagine!!!
I agree Bulbasur and Wartortle are really strong Pokémon and deserve all the respect that someone can give them!!! And we all know that writers are masters to screwed up things for Ash, so no surprise there!!!
Right choise!!! I like Wartortle's badass attidude but he has a lot of things to learn and achive before he's ready for a battle with Charizard or Zippo!!! And it was Charizard right to beat Zippo!!!
Well Charizard's trainning with all the wild Charizards pay of!!! I really like how strong he is but on the same time he has weak spots that can bring him down!!! And I really hope that they will keep working so they become even stronger!!!
Yes!!!! I can't wait!!! I wonder what Pokémon you will use this time!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Oct 15, 2017 17:43:45 GMT
We'll see if we can fit something like that in, with everything else going on! I'll keep it in mind.
That's great to hear, then! That's the kind of battle we shoot for, thank you!
I think Max already has that feeling. But, you'll see soon!
Yeah, Wartortle still has more growing to do, even though he's already grown incredibly strong. But yeah, Charizard picked up the slack! And they'll keep getting stronger, for sure. He'll still have something to learn after this league, and Ash hasn't even learned about Mega Evolution, yet!
You'll notice a pattern in the teams, as these rounds go on!
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