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Post by Nafsika on Oct 24, 2017 18:55:19 GMT
You little sneaky weasel! Oh I'm so furious right now! You cut it in the best part and you did it on purpose! Aaaaaaaa! And I have to wait two freaking weeks for the rest! So unfair! I'm crying inside me!
Ok now that I said my complaints time to say how excited I am! The first scene with Lance and Deidra was cool and I like how you use it to pronounce Ash`s next opponent! The moment with Misty and Max was nice and I like how offended was Max that the others don't take him seriously! Don't take it so personal Max is just that Ash has more experience from you! As for the battle I find it really weird and quite easy to knockout three of Max`s Pokémon without much fight but now I know that it was all part of his plans! Really sneaky to use Paul's strategies against Ash once again! I wonder how Ash will turn things around! Max has left with three Pokémon and Ash with five! What might be the other two? I have to think about it because I miss something!
Generally really good! I hope the end be something that will leave me with the mouth open!
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Post by chosenone151 on Oct 24, 2017 19:20:44 GMT
The suspense is part of the fun! Gotta build up the hype.
Thank you!
And yeah, but he's just a kid surrounded by people more experienced than him, you know how Max is.
Max didn't really plan on doing that badly, but remember; not only is Ash much more experienced than Max, but his Pokémon are, too! They're much stronger than Max's by default, so defeating them without a good strategy on Max's part will be easy.
Luckily, he's a quick thinker!
Well, there's a theme to Ash's team, again! Think about which Pokémon he's used and what connects them, and you'll be able to guess his remaining Pokémon!
I'm sure you'll enjoy the finale!
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Post by Nafsika on Oct 24, 2017 20:01:24 GMT
Ah I like the agony and I hate it at the same time! And the worst part is that I understand why you did it! So I guess we're fine!
Yourself no me! You know how much I like your story and how enjoying to do the drama queen in moments like that! Ah it's so awesome! I can't wait to read the end of this battle!
Oh yes! His ego must hurt really much! He wants to prove himself better than Ash so he's trying really hard and for that he didn't start his travel in Hoenn!
I completely understand it! He can't battle Ash with brutal force like Paul so he needs to think fast! The only problem is that Ash thrives in moments like that! The more challenge the battle the more creative and unpredictable he turns! Which is really bad for Max!
Wait a minute all his Pokémon right now are from Johto so the remaining Pokémon are Meganioum and Fairaligator! Did I find it?
So am I! I really can't wait! Thank you again! It was great as ever!
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Post by chosenone151 on Oct 24, 2017 20:58:02 GMT
Haha yeah, I know what you mean!
Yeah. It's something he'll have to deal with through the battle.
Exactly! This battle definitely won't be easy for him, but he'll at least make it interesting.
You're mostly right!
You're welcome! Glad you enjoyed it.
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Post by Nafsika on Oct 24, 2017 21:15:58 GMT
I'm glad that we are at the same page in that!
Well battling your idol is never easy! Your Max reminds me of Sawyer in so many things! The only difference is that Max didn't write down what learn from Ash!
I can't wait to see what Max has planned for Ash! And I also wonder what other Pokémon he has! We haven't seen yet his Ivasaur!
What did I miss?
Always!
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Post by chosenone151 on Oct 24, 2017 21:17:57 GMT
Yeah, Sawyer's a bit smarter than Max, admittedly. It doesn't help that Max started his journey halfway through the league season, either. But they are similar!
You'll see his starter Pokémon in the next chapter!
Well Croconaw hasn't evolved into Feraligatr yet, remember? But he has to, sooner or later!
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Post by Nafsika on Oct 24, 2017 21:48:08 GMT
Well in his first apperance in the show he strangled really hard till to learn how to battle! But still they have a lot in common! I hope Max don't be really hard with himself as Sawyer was when he lost to Ash!
Ah nice! Has she evolve to Venusaur?
Damn my bad memory with the Pokémon names! At least I was close! Wait are you planning to evolve him during this battle? And are going to put Meganium against Electravire? She's immune to electric attacks so will be a fair play! Although Electrivire`s fire paunch might be a problem!
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Post by chosenone151 on Oct 24, 2017 21:55:50 GMT
Yeah, that's true, but given the difference in experience he was a very fast learner! You'll see how Max feels about it as the battle goes on.
She has!
You'll see when you read it. And no, Meganium's not fast enough to deal with Electivire after it's used Motor Drive. You'll see!
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Post by Nafsika on Oct 24, 2017 22:08:35 GMT
Yeah that's true! I was really surprised with how much he changed from the first time we saw him till the league! He got a lot of confidence and belief to himself! Ok! Although something telling me that he won't be happy with the result! Thank god that May and Misty are there to help him!
Ah that's make it even more interesting! I can't wait to she her in battle again!
I take it as a yes! I can't wait for that to happen! Ah what a pity! But that leaves a battle between two grass types! Oh that will be really interesting!
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Post by chosenone151 on Nov 7, 2017 5:24:55 GMT
Chapter 82 is up, and the second half of the battle comes with it! Check it out to see the results of the long-awaited match!
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