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Post by chosenone151 on Feb 17, 2017 1:08:04 GMT
For sure! The real big battles aren't here yet. But, there's plenty of fun in between!
You've got that right lol. I'm very lucky! I might've converted her to pearlshipping haha
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Sinnoh Trainer
Posts: 880
OTP: Pokeshipping
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
Badass Punchline: Hello fellow pearlshippers!!!!
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Post by Nafsika on Feb 17, 2017 8:59:03 GMT
Perfect!!!! I will continue read till the end!!! I can't wait!!!! Τhe more the better!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Feb 19, 2017 0:41:38 GMT
Sounds good! I hope other members get to check this out, too. I'd love to get commentary/critique on how Ash and Dawn have been handled! Among other things, but this forum would know that best haha
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Sinnoh Trainer
Posts: 880
OTP: Pokeshipping
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
Badass Punchline: Hello fellow pearlshippers!!!!
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Post by Nafsika on Feb 19, 2017 17:46:22 GMT
I haven't notice that you have put and the trelair!!! It's so awesome!!! You did very good job to present your story!!! What's the name of your blog??? I'm defently going to register!!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Feb 19, 2017 18:03:03 GMT
Thank you! It's another-rxad.tumblr.com! And cool! The blog has art and a page for a lot of the characters where you can check out who they are! And what Pokémon they currently have, if applicable.
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Sinnoh Trainer
Posts: 880
OTP: Pokeshipping
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
Badass Punchline: Hello fellow pearlshippers!!!!
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Post by Nafsika on Feb 19, 2017 20:25:48 GMT
Thank you!!! I will check it out!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Feb 19, 2017 21:12:43 GMT
Hope it helps! It does have a few spoilers, though.
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Sinnoh Trainer
Posts: 880
OTP: Pokeshipping
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
Badass Punchline: Hello fellow pearlshippers!!!!
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Post by Nafsika on Feb 20, 2017 1:03:21 GMT
It doesn't matter!!! I'm still going to read all your story till the end!!!
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Sinnoh Trainer
Posts: 880
OTP: Pokeshipping
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
Badass Punchline: Hello fellow pearlshippers!!!!
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Post by Nafsika on Feb 20, 2017 11:12:42 GMT
Hi!!!! I'm back and it's review time!!! Sorry it took me so long to make a comment for your story but those days were a little bit crazy!!! Anyway!!! Let's get start!!! Dawn's participation in this contest was awesome!!! I liked the fact that she beat that crazy girl Ember and the advice from the old lady was nice touch!!!! And then we have Clefairy and Clefable and dance!!!! That was hillarious!!! And the pearlshipping moment was so tence!!! I was like yeah and Kiss kiss kiss!!!!! The battle between Ash and Misty was realy strong and tence with a funny touch!!!! I love Psyduck and how strong and stupid he's at the same time!!! And that Gyarados is a pain in the ass!!! Realy strong!!! I wouldn't want to be his opponent!!! What happend next it realy surprised me with the good way because I haven't give it a thought!!! Max is back!!! I miss him a little bit!!! The funny thing with Max is that he is the opposite of Ash!!! Max is clever and he follows the book instead Ash can't stand books but he is so creative that make him a master in battles!!!! I loved theirs battle and how Max's Pokémon reacted in the battle!!! That Ivysaur was a little arrogant but she took her lesson!!! And then we have Dawn and Misty's conversation!!!! I was a little bit shocked when I read this scene!!! But I liked the good end and the fact that they became friends!!! But I wouldn't want to be in Dawn's place if the things won't work out with Ash!!! Misty can be very intimidated!!! And then we have Croconaw!!!! He made a scene for a bro fling!!! It was funny to read it but not so funny to chase him down!!! And all this troubles so he could dance!!! But all ended well so no need to worry!!! Apart from Dawn's jacket which got filled with mud!!! That was bad!!! And Pachurisu was realy a bad ass in this scene and very helpfull!!! So in conclusion this was a realy good part!!! You have thought everything and I can't wait to get to the bottom of your story!!! So that's all for today!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Feb 20, 2017 21:37:47 GMT
Don't worry about it!
Thanks! Yeah, Ember tends to be a real pain in the rear lol.
And great! That's the impression I wanted to give lol. Misty isn't someone to mess with!
You've got that right lol. Ash and Max are very different, and Max has a few things to learn before he can be a serious opponent.
Haha yeah she is scary, but I think the two of them would get along well. She wants Dawn to succeed where she didn't!
Aw yeah lol. I'm glad you enjoyed those chapters, thank you! I enjoyed the review!
There are a couple of battles coming up soon, so hold on tight!
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