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Post by chosenone151 on Feb 14, 2017 15:38:36 GMT
Thank you! Yeah, having him on Mt.Silver, I really couldn't pass up the opportunity to get Larvitar back. And I wanted to give Bayleef a good evolution scene, too!
Wow, thanks! Comparing to XY&Z is an honor lol. I had a lot of fun with that battle, myself!
For Riolu/Lucario... Well, read the next chapter and I promsie you won't be disappointed! You're almost there haha.
Thanks so much! Don't worry, this story's not near done, and you've still got over 50 chapters to catch up on haha.
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Post by Nafsika on Feb 14, 2017 15:44:59 GMT
YEAH!!!! I'm so exited!!! Then I will see you later because now I'm going to continue the reading!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Feb 14, 2017 15:53:50 GMT
Sounds like a plan! Oh yeah, I might as well post a bit of the art here. Oh, and I think I'll update the original post with a trailer video I made for it!
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Post by frosty on Feb 14, 2017 17:23:28 GMT
Have you really!? Wow, thanks! That's a huge honor. If it's okay to ask, what about it really hooked you? Also, you might be happy to know that a new chapter just went up! Well, the thing I liked most about it has to be how you didn't stray too far from the characters personalities. Another important thing to me was the lack of spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes. You also don't repeat things when it's not necessary and the story is very interesting. The way you handled Ash and Dawn's relationship was great. I also enjoy there being an actual conflict and TR not being bumbling idiots all the time. And I already have read the new chapter- it's a nice break from the drama with TR while still being relevant to the story.
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Post by Nafsika on Feb 14, 2017 22:13:18 GMT
You have made a trailer!!!!! This is so awesome!!! God your story will be my death!!!! It's so good!!! But you will have to wait for tomorow's review because I haven't finish yet today's reading!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Feb 15, 2017 0:12:47 GMT
Have you really!? Wow, thanks! That's a huge honor. If it's okay to ask, what about it really hooked you? Also, you might be happy to know that a new chapter just went up! Well, the thing I liked most about it has to be how you didn't stray too far from the characters personalities. Another important thing to me was the lack of spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes. You also don't repeat things when it's not necessary and the story is very interesting. The way you handled Ash and Dawn's relationship was great. I also enjoy there being an actual conflict and TR not being bumbling idiots all the time. And I already have read the new chapter- it's a nice break from the drama with TR while still being relevant to the story. That's great to hear! Writing Ash maturing (somewhat) and opening his eyes to anything beyond friendship is a difficult task lol, you don't want to stray too far from who he is, but you don't want to keep him in the corner he's been written into, either. I'm glad that came off well. Yeah lol, I'm tired of them being in the show for that very reason, they provide no actual meaningful conflict, or even entertainment, at this point. Glad you liked the newest one! Yeah, that'll get a break for a little bit. I think we need that almost as much as Ash and co. do haha. I really appreciate the feedback! There'll be another chapter on the 28th.
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Post by chosenone151 on Feb 15, 2017 0:25:10 GMT
You have made a trailer!!!!! This is so awesome!!! God your story will be my death!!!! It's so good!!! But you will have to wait for tomorow's review because I haven't finish yet today's reading!!! I was hoping to promote the story more! Unfortunately the video hasn't spread much lol That's some really high praise! And yeah, sounds good. Looking forward to tomorrow!
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Post by Nafsika on Feb 15, 2017 14:34:36 GMT
Do you know what time is? It's review time!!!! I'm so exited about this!!! I never thought that would be such fun!!! Anyway!!! Let's start!!! Your story as progress become even better!!! I can't wait to finish it!!! So the trainning was realy tοugh!!!! I couldn't handle it!!!! Ash without food for a week!!!! Come on that's very hard and mean!!! But I choke to death from laughter when Ash realized that Riley knew about his hidden stuf!!! That was such hillarious scene!!! Thank you very much for Rosa!!! I love her!!! When she hatched I was like a crazy excited and happy person at the same time!!!! I didn't know what to do for my excitement!!! The battles were realy good and you surprised me with Tobia's return!!! I haven't see that coming!!! I loved the battle between Ash and Paul!!! I always wanted Ash to use Charizard against Paul's Pokémon!!! So thank you for that scene!!! And Ash and Dawn's reunion was so good!!! And the seventeenth chapter is my favorite!!!! Their interaction was the same as in anime!!! You realy know how to handle all these stuff!!! Please keep your stories as good as this one!!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Feb 15, 2017 14:58:10 GMT
Yeah the training did get brutal, haha! Well, that was the idea! To get Ash to rely on himself and survive in harsh conditions. But yeah, Riley was pretty harsh lol. And you're welcome with Rosa! I'm really fond of her character.
Thanks! And yeah, the Paul battle was a hell of a lot of fun to write.
Wow, really? Thank you! I'm glad it was in character. And don't worry, there's plenty more!
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Post by Nafsika on Feb 15, 2017 15:01:22 GMT
I'm glad to hear that because I can't stop reading!!!
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