Hoenn Elite
Posts: 386 
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
MBTI: INFP
Badass Punchline: No one can be a replacement for another person
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Post by ravencupid on Apr 11, 2015 16:22:38 GMT
It's lovely icy!!! I love it  |
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Post by icypiplup on Apr 12, 2015 21:05:23 GMT
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Post by icypiplup on Apr 15, 2015 0:24:51 GMT
One of Shpee's posts inspired this banner...  Click on it to make it bigger. If you can't, the transparent speech bubble says "who's next!?!" And the other one says "Ash has other traveling companions!?!" Plot: Serena finds out Ash traveled with Misty,May,Dawn,Iris in the past and rages, then she kidnaps them and kills Dawn first. Then she says "who's next!?!", then kills them all. |
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Sinnoh Elite
Inactive
Posts: 1,160 
OTP: Saimatsu
MBTI: INFP
Badass Punchline: A lone warrior surviving hundreds of battles, when it comes to losing, I'm the strongest.
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Post by PlatinumSun on Apr 15, 2015 1:27:40 GMT
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Hoenn Elite
Okay, round 2 now.
Posts: 389
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
MBTI: INFP
Badass Punchline: Some choose to destroy. Others choose to create. Some aid the light. Other ally with darkness, As for myself, I walk the line between the two.
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Post by knightofbalance on Apr 15, 2015 13:36:16 GMT
Funny and not over the top like shpee, who I can't take seriously.
Wait, Serena's traveling with Dawn in my fanfic.
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Gotta Go!
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Post by icypiplup on Apr 16, 2015 2:43:45 GMT
Thanks PlatinumSun! knightofbalance I was reading chp 2 to 4 of your fanfic and so far I love it! Finally a fanfic where Serena and Dawn get along!, well sort of.. if Ash isn't involved they could be good friends! Btw, you might want to proofread your story before posting, there are a few errors. Also (suggestion) you could use different perspectives to help explain the thoughts and feelings of characters more clearly. |
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Hoenn Elite
Okay, round 2 now.
Posts: 389
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
MBTI: INFP
Badass Punchline: Some choose to destroy. Others choose to create. Some aid the light. Other ally with darkness, As for myself, I walk the line between the two.
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Post by knightofbalance on Apr 16, 2015 13:40:34 GMT
KOB: (Rolls in with Serena trying to stab him) Thanks icypiplup, glad to hear it. Serena: Die! KOB: Crap, this b**** is crazy! (Stops an incoming knife before turning back) And I agree that my stories need a proofreading before publishing. But I prefer the 3rd/1st person perspective I'm on. Still, I'm just gonna focus on one or two characters per chapter (Serena stabs him.) Youch! Sorry Icy, I gotta get out of here! Serena: Come back here you B******! |
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Post by icypiplup on Apr 17, 2015 1:10:55 GMT
IP: Serena we went through this. You seriously have to get over your anger issues! Or that issue you have with killing people that interact with Ash in any way..
Serena: *continues chasing KOB*
IP: I'll go get the baseball bat.. *comes back, and hits Serena from behind, knocking her out*
Serena:(unconscious)
IP: *drags Serena to the therapist*
Therapist: It's her again! *hangs up closed sign*
IP: Hmm.. *sees dumpster, dumps Serena in it* I better leave before she wakes up...
Before I leave.. *takes out marker, and draws a mustache*
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Post by shpee on Apr 17, 2015 16:21:24 GMT
i think harming Serena was not the best idea...  RUN!! |
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Post by icypiplup on Apr 17, 2015 23:08:47 GMT
Is that Ash? If it is.. THE DARK ASH RETURNED!! RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!!!!!!!!!! *people screaming* *runs to jet and flies to random island*
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