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Post by yankeeimperialist on Jul 12, 2024 4:07:53 GMT
Title: Divinity Genre: Romance, Action/Adventure Ships: Pearl, Amour Summary:Dawn, brokenhearted by love never confessed gets the worst second chance she could have ever asked for. However, that may be the least of her concerns when she comes to find out why. Set when Ash and co. are young adults, Divergent AU from XY. Pearlshipping AshxDawn SatoHika with some Amourshipping. This story is not intended as edgy but it is going to be a bit dark. Ao3: archiveofourown.org/works/46152190FF.Net: www.fanfiction.net/s/14216193/1/Divinity Wattpad: www.wattpad.com/story/338283675-divinityI created page 1 of the story using AI voices for fun: vocaroo.com/1nCPZs1P6zEPAbout this fic project:I began work on this originally back in 2014-ish. But ultimately never managed to get past a hangup in my writer's block. Two years ago I settled I was going to get this out and was able to put out the first 3 chapters as I finished college after revising to hell and back. Chapter 2 was most notable in the revision process. I am continuing to work on this, but life, being what it is as an adult, means progress is ultimately impeded. I have a clear idea of where the story is going, a number of major events, and how it ends. As someone who has been writing to eventually be a professional and published author one day, this is my last fanfiction I'll ever write before resuming original work. One last test and refinement to my processes and general style. Chapter 3 my favorite chapter so far and arguably the best written one. I must have combed over some of the scenes like 20 times tinkering and improving something here or there.
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Badass Punchline: You have self-awareness or you have nothing.
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Post by coatatopotato on Jul 31, 2024 17:38:49 GMT
yankeeimperialist Loved loved loved chapter 2! There was so much creativity in that battle. I especially liked how the Pokémon often changed the battlescape like Sceptile's vines or Pikachu's palisades. It's a great twist on the rotating battlefield terrains from the anime.
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Post by yankeeimperialist on Aug 6, 2024 20:19:06 GMT
yankeeimperialist Loved loved loved chapter 2! There was so much creativity in that battle. I especially liked how the Pokémon often changed the battlescape like Sceptile's vines or Pikachu's palisades. It's a great twist on the rotating battlefield terrains from the anime. Thank you C, just got back from vacation so I'm responding now. The battle rewrite from its original draft was a serious endeavor and both things you mentioned particularly were a result of that change. As soon as I had the idea for the Palisade tactic the ideas of what could be done with it quickly stacked up and made Pikachu's matchup's less of an endeavor to write. I'm particularly happy with the feint attack on Gengar before the volt tackle surprise of all of them myself. I did see your comments on Ao3 as well, thank you for your particular feedback on Seven, the tone of the story is one of my biggest concerns so getting that insight into reader's perception helps a lot.
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