First Class Trainer
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Post by sirus7009 on Aug 4, 2018 8:12:48 GMT
i actually won second place in a pearlshipping contest on deviant art with this fic. looking back, i'm proud of it, but i feel something was.... off... feel free to enjoy the read, or if you feel up to it, critique and let me know if anything could be better. definitely looking at out of character moments from my point of view, but who knows, maybe it will be just fine and in character to other readers. also ignore the tsukasa bit in the beginning.... old phase i went through. www.fanfiction.net/s/7322415/1/Love-is-Like-a-Falling-Leaf
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Post by Deleted on Aug 5, 2018 9:56:03 GMT
Very nice fic, you deserved to finish 2nd. Your fic is very good.
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Sinnoh Trainer
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OTP: Pokeshipping
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
Badass Punchline: Hello fellow pearlshippers!!!!
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Post by Nafsika on Aug 5, 2018 19:53:35 GMT
I'll read it as soon as I can!
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First Class Trainer
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Post by sirus7009 on Aug 7, 2018 14:19:32 GMT
Very nice fic, you deserved to finish 2nd. Your fic is very good. thank you ;w; ash didnt seem too out of character or anything...?
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First Class Trainer
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Post by sirus7009 on Aug 7, 2018 14:20:37 GMT
I'll read it as soon as I can! thank you, i hope you enjoy it ;w;
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Post by icypiplup on Aug 11, 2018 4:25:41 GMT
Aw... I loved the ending!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 2, 2018 11:40:22 GMT
Your fic was awesome.
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