Johto Champion
pearlshipping still lives in my head rent free
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Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
Badass Punchline: As long as we have the desire, pearlshipping will always keep burning like a flame.
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Post by DawnForever101 on Sept 5, 2015 22:32:07 GMT
Sounds like a great idea for a first fanfic, LuigiKartDS!
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Post by IceArceus on Sept 5, 2015 22:45:05 GMT
LuigiKartDS that's a pretty good idea for a fanfiction! I would read it.
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Post by NovaStorm on Sept 5, 2015 23:20:31 GMT
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Kanto Elite
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Badass Punchline: United we stand, together we fall
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Post by LuigiKartDS on Sept 6, 2015 0:51:59 GMT
DawnForever101 IceArceus NovaStorm Thanks. Anytime you want me to make another one, just give me a synopsis, and I'll see what I can do. Thanks again for the support!
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Kanto Trainer
Go Pearlshipping
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Post by Pikachuxx on Sept 6, 2015 3:26:52 GMT
Sounds Awesome
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Sinnoh Elite
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OTP: Saimatsu
MBTI: INFP
Badass Punchline: A lone warrior surviving hundreds of battles, when it comes to losing, I'm the strongest.
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Post by PlatinumSun on Sept 6, 2015 5:09:23 GMT
Go for it!
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Hoenn Elite
Okay, round 2 now.
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Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
MBTI: INFP
Badass Punchline: Some choose to destroy. Others choose to create. Some aid the light. Other ally with darkness, As for myself, I walk the line between the two.
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Post by knightofbalance on Sept 6, 2015 5:13:50 GMT
IceArceus, SakuraBlossom, CherryCheer, NovaStorm, mew151, SakuraBlossom, CherryCheer, Title: A Friend Returns! A Rival of Serena's? (idea for XY091 or a later episode) Ash is still in Kalos, ready for his next gym bade, until someone taps his shoulder. He thinks it's Serena, but Serena denies it. Ash decides to see if it was Clemont, who's behind him. He turns, only to not only find Clemont and Bonnie, but Dawn! Of course. Who else? When Serena asks who she is, Ash tells her that she traveled with him throughout Sinnoh. They high five, and Dawn decides to join them. While walking, Serena asks Dawn about her feelings for Ash, but Dawn misinterprets what she asked, and says that they're like partners. One look on Serena's face, and Dawn realizes what she meant. Dawn blushes, but no confirmation is made. Serena blushes as well. Serena is then put to the test when Miette returns and asks for a battle. Ash obviously agrees, and Dawn wishes him good luck. Fair enough, Ash wins, and as a reward, Dawn hugs him in joy, where Serena displays a jealous face. Miette begins to tease Ash about other tactics for the fight, but Dawn saves him the trouble of answering by telling her that he doesn't have time for her questions and only has time to make someone proud, and winks at Ash. Per usual, Ash is clueless to what she is suggesting. Buneary comes out and congratulates Pikachu for the battle. Knowing that Pokémon represent their trainers' emotions (if the Pokémon fall in love, the trainers might, too), Serena becomes worried, though Bonnie reassures her as the episode ends, So what do you think? Not bad for a first fanfiction. Right? Nice, but take your time typing it out and think your ideas out. Not a bashing but some advice.
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Post by IceArceus on Sept 6, 2015 8:26:54 GMT
Yes, if you write your ideas out, for example in a spider diagram/ mind map or maybe a chart, or split the ideas up in paragraphs of characters, major events, special concepts then it would be Mich easier to turn into the end product. And if you want to get into fanfiction seriously then I'd also advise getting a paper notepad for writing your ideas,developing stories and writing short drafts in.That's what I do and what a lot of other fanfic writers do too. I hope you do a sequel/continuation to that episode! The ending's a bit of a cliffhager. Nothing wrong with that of course but it makes me want closure. Sorry if that was a bit long.
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Kanto Elite
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Badass Punchline: United we stand, together we fall
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Post by LuigiKartDS on Sept 6, 2015 13:14:18 GMT
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Post by SakuraBlossom on Sept 7, 2015 23:55:44 GMT
I really like the fanfic idea, LuigiKartDS! You could also ask another writer to proofread your work before you post it to make sure the writing flows well along with checking for any issues with grammar, structure, etc.
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