Fanfiction Idea

IceArceus, SakuraBlossom, CherryCheer, NovaStorm, mew151, SakuraBlossom, CherryCheer, Title: A Friend Returns! A Rival of Serena's? (idea for XY091 or a later episode)

Ash is still in Kalos, ready for his next gym bade, until someone taps his shoulder. He thinks it's Serena, but Serena denies it. Ash decides to see if it was Clemont, who's behind him. He turns, only to not only find Clemont and Bonnie, but Dawn! Of course. Who else? When Serena asks who she is, Ash tells her that she traveled with him throughout Sinnoh. They high five, and Dawn decides to join them. While walking, Serena asks Dawn about her feelings for Ash, but Dawn misinterprets what she asked, and says that they're like partners. One look on Serena's face, and Dawn realizes what she meant. Dawn blushes, but no confirmation is made. Serena blushes as well. Serena is then put to the test when Miette returns and asks for a battle. Ash obviously agrees, and Dawn wishes him good luck. Fair enough, Ash wins, and as a reward, Dawn hugs him in joy, where Serena displays a jealous face. Miette begins to tease Ash about other tactics for the fight, but Dawn saves him the trouble of answering by telling her that he doesn't have time for her questions and only has time to make someone proud, and winks at Ash. Per usual, Ash is clueless to what she is suggesting. Buneary comes out and congratulates Pikachu for the battle. Knowing that Pokémon represent their trainers' emotions (if the Pokémon fall in love, the trainers might, too), Serena becomes worried, though Bonnie reassures her as the episode ends,

So what do you think? Not bad for a first fanfiction. Right?