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Post by IceArceus on Apr 12, 2014 7:18:57 GMT
Well, if your fic's not, like, Advanceshipping then I never objected to you showing it.
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Post by NovaStorm on Apr 12, 2014 7:39:39 GMT
Ok then I was kind of worried after seeing the Advance-like one you read. I link it after I post my 3rd chapter for those who want it.
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Post by A-Complexity on Apr 12, 2014 11:23:55 GMT
That was probably Hika's fanfic., which isn't Advanceshipping. It's Pearlshipping and he's slowly building it up. I enjoy reading it.
Please, post your fic. Nova as you please. I enjoy reading fics. and new fics. are always welcome.
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Post by NovaStorm on Apr 12, 2014 22:16:58 GMT
Story Link
All right here it is. The only thing I ask is not to say anything revealing as a review. Thanks to those who helped me here!
www.fanfiction.net/s/10018468/1/Saving-Pikachu You'll have to get to Chapter 3 to see any major shipping. Hopefully no one will think the shipping was constructed poorly.
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Post by IceArceus on Apr 13, 2014 7:06:17 GMT
I actually really liked it. Not too heavy on the shipping or characterisation.
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Post by Blackscorpion2 on Apr 13, 2014 8:27:36 GMT
I don't get why you thought we would mind that, your story was simple and interesting, just the way a fan-fic should be. There are not too many hint's which is good because then the title would be OOC. I suggest you work on a little more with your battle/contest writing skills Nova. You did a marvelous job though ^_^
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Post by NovaStorm on Apr 14, 2014 7:35:28 GMT
Just know that there are hints but it's not about them
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Post by Deleted on Apr 14, 2014 14:05:13 GMT
You just focus on the different dynamics of the relationships if you want to have for example orange pearl and contest whippings focus on each individual shipping build them up along the story either with flashbacks or dynamic storytelling. If you have any conflicts or anything you can have misty not like dawn or Drew and ash get into a fight without it being a bash. Just keep it within character.
A misty bash would " Misty sees Dawn for the first wrapped in Ashs' arms and just goes into a rage. She stomps over with fire in her eyes and with irrational fury smacks Ash and Dawn without warning or explanation and then storms off.
Misty is a hot blooded girl but not that bad and I makes her look like a terrible person and she just flew off the handle. Just be mindful of the framework of your characters which is very important when doing multiple ships.
I hope this helps at least a little bit. I would love to read your story.
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Post by NovaStorm on May 9, 2014 4:23:17 GMT
Finally finished another chapter for those who care with references to Ash and Dawn and other pairings (if you can find them), but shipping isn't the main purpose of mine. www.fanfiction.net/s/10018468/1/Saving-PikachuI would have paired Ash and Serena(from the first two chapters) if it weren't for discovering Project Pearlshipping
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Post by IceArceus on May 9, 2014 6:58:16 GMT
Good chapter. I sense the Geekchic... And even though shipping is not the focus, I'm glad you chose Pearl.
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