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Post by NovaStorm on Mar 30, 2014 10:01:37 GMT
I started my first fic before I found DataCore, it had a hint of Amour in it. I haven't touched it since, so it only has two chapters. That's because thenext chapter would involve Ash meeting all of friends to help him save Pikachu after the Wallace Cup, including Dawn. I already know my entire story in my mind, but I just can't seem to type it all; I feel like they take too much time. My other problem is the shipping, I've already added Orangeshipping but I don't know how not to bash other ships while putting Pearl in. I don't want to make it harsh bashing, so I need help on this. Please dont hate on Ash thanking Serena for help in the unlikely case that you read it; it will all change in later chapters.
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Post by SneakySalamander on Mar 30, 2014 10:07:40 GMT
Sounds awesome Bashing as in bashing other Ash shippings, right?
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Post by NovaStorm on Mar 30, 2014 19:07:50 GMT
Yes precisely
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Post by SneakySalamander on Mar 30, 2014 19:37:44 GMT
Of course, bashing is probably going to be inevitable. However, if you don't want the bashing to go for too long, you could perhaps make the people being shipped with Ash understand and tolerate the Pearlshipping
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Post by IceArceus on Mar 30, 2014 20:22:27 GMT
Well, if a ship is in a fanfiction, it means the other rival ones aren't viable in the fanfiction. The way I see it, it's not bashing at all, unless you make, say, Misty a horrible character just so Pokeshipping doesn't work, in literally all of your fics. So just do what you must to make the fic good.
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Post by NovaStorm on Mar 30, 2014 20:35:00 GMT
Ok thanks! I've thought of things I can do now.
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Post by SneakySalamander on Mar 30, 2014 21:34:32 GMT
No worries Sorry I couldn't be much help though
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Post by NovaStorm on Mar 30, 2014 21:50:27 GMT
No, when I say thanks I mean thanks to all, including you ZZ.
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Post by Swag on Apr 11, 2014 17:03:28 GMT
Could you somehow send us a link to your work? I would like to read and analyze it ^_^
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Post by NovaStorm on Apr 12, 2014 3:54:48 GMT
I would if you weren't the only person wanting to see it. It isn't a Pearl fic, just a fic that has Pearl in it. I finished the chapter I originally needed help for, but now I think I overdone the pairings. There are quite a lot of them considering the amount of characters. Then again pairings are inevitable in my type of story. And I find that mutual ships fit in more naturally than one-sided ones.
Plus I don't know if anyone would want to see a fic with a non-romantic dilemma. Just because Pearlshipping is in a fic doesn't mean it is truly a Pearlshipping fanfiction; it needs to be solely about the relationshipping between the two. As much as I'd like to show mine, I think pure Pearlshipping fics are expected here. But if I'm wrong, then hopefully the fact that it's not just Ash and Dawn in the story will be accepted.
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