Hoenn Elite
Okay, round 2 now.
Posts: 389 
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
MBTI: INFP
Badass Punchline: Some choose to destroy. Others choose to create. Some aid the light. Other ally with darkness, As for myself, I walk the line between the two.
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Post by knightofbalance on May 14, 2015 17:33:17 GMT
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Post by NovaStorm on May 16, 2015 23:50:57 GMT
You got some pretty good reviews on this, knightofbalance. Although one of them said "Piplup is a male, not a female" lol Honestly, there's no trouble in having Serena being jealous or whatnot. Other writers do that too, so you'll be fine. Besides, someone even said that there aren't enough Pearl fics out there, so you're doing good!  |
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Hoenn Elite
Okay, round 2 now.
Posts: 389
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
MBTI: INFP
Badass Punchline: Some choose to destroy. Others choose to create. Some aid the light. Other ally with darkness, As for myself, I walk the line between the two.
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Post by knightofbalance on May 18, 2015 13:27:04 GMT
You got some pretty good reviews on this, knightofbalance. Although one of them said "Piplup is a male, not a female" lol Honestly, there's no trouble in having Serena being jealous or whatnot. Other writers do that too, so you'll be fine. Besides, someone even said that there aren't enough Pearl fics out there, so you're doing good! (Steam rises from armor) For the last time, I know Piplup is Male!!! I just changed his gender since Dawn dresses him up as female a lot. (Cools down) Thanks anyway man. |
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Sinnoh Elite
Inactive
Posts: 1,160
OTP: Saimatsu
MBTI: INFP
Badass Punchline: A lone warrior surviving hundreds of battles, when it comes to losing, I'm the strongest.
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Post by PlatinumSun on May 18, 2015 23:18:18 GMT
Is Buddby Bunnelby?
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Johto Elite
Checking in and waving ya'll "HELLO"!!!
Posts: 113 
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
Badass Punchline: Life's handing you lemons, make lemonade then.
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Post by Dawnlover on May 21, 2015 11:44:57 GMT
knightofbalance Awesome chapters :DCan't wait to read more!!! Specially the scene when Ash hugs Dawn . Aww... that's so cute!!! One suggestion: Wouldn't it be great if you included Paul as well. I mean, people DO ship him with Dawn so he might be a great character in your story. You could have him battling for Dawn's affection along with Ash or maybe Dawn favouring Paul and Ash getting jealous. Whatever suits you. Oh yes, please try to update faster, nobody likes to wait. P.S what move did Floette use to protect Dawn??
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Post by Deleted on May 21, 2015 13:28:00 GMT
why don't we just use zhe title of zhe fanfic as foreshadowing. zhat dawn in zis fic is a new dawn, a FAKE dawn.
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Hoenn Elite
Okay, round 2 now.
Posts: 389
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
MBTI: INFP
Badass Punchline: Some choose to destroy. Others choose to create. Some aid the light. Other ally with darkness, As for myself, I walk the line between the two.
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Post by knightofbalance on May 21, 2015 16:58:18 GMT
PlatinumSun (Falls down anime style) Crap! Dawnlover Thanks, that means a lot. Yes, I might bring Paul back, but he won't be a love rival. That just doesn't suit him. I'm working on chapter 5 but I got sidetracked by a new video game and exams. P.S. The move is called (SPOILER) Light of Ruin. @drmedic (Draws his hand back and punches him) Shut it, drmedic AKA Shpee.
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Johto Elite
Checking in and waving ya'll "HELLO"!!!
Posts: 113
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
Badass Punchline: Life's handing you lemons, make lemonade then.
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Post by Dawnlover on May 22, 2015 9:41:52 GMT
knightofbalanceAww man!! You really can't make Paul a love rival?  It isn't that hard but I understand and I know that you have a better story in your mind so Good Luck and post the next chapter ASAP. You know I really hate to wait for something I'm eagerly intereated in and I'm sure many people are waiting for the updates too so please don't distract yourself Light of ruin,huh? Isn't it the signature move of floette. Well done, you put the right move at the right moment.
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Post by icypiplup on May 24, 2015 15:04:06 GMT
Dawnlover I stalk his fanfiction page waiting for an update... 
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Hoenn Elite
Okay, round 2 now.
Posts: 389
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
MBTI: INFP
Badass Punchline: Some choose to destroy. Others choose to create. Some aid the light. Other ally with darkness, As for myself, I walk the line between the two.
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Post by knightofbalance on May 24, 2015 15:07:54 GMT
Dawnlover I stalk his fanfiction page waiting for an update... (Looks at her then at the screen) I'd say that's weird, but I do the same thing. Don't worry, I'm working on chapter 5! It's a little tricky but I'm making progress! |
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It isn't that hard but I understand and I know that you have a better story in your mind so Good Luck and post the next chapter ASAP. You know I really hate to wait for something I'm eagerly intereated in and I'm sure many people are waiting for the updates too so please don't distract yourself 
need a break from that. I cannot express how much more I appreciate fan-translations of anything now