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Post by icypiplup on Nov 27, 2014 2:51:02 GMT
That was pretty good! Can't wait till chapter 2 comes out!
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Post by shiny.pikachu on Nov 27, 2014 4:07:08 GMT
icypiplup it's already out. I'll post it if you want
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OTP: Saber X Shirou.
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Badass Punchline: Nice Watch. Too bad I’ll have to break it. Break your face that is.
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Post by shiny.pikachu on Nov 27, 2014 4:13:35 GMT
The anticipation was getting to her. She didn't know that this boat would take a day to go to Pallet Town! How long would it be before she would get to see him? The boringness of it all was effect her!her discontent at the slowness of the ship was eve ident. But at least she still had quite a few memories with Ash to atone for the undeniable boredom of being on a ship. The boredom and anticipation actully made her more excited. She then slowly fell into a deep sleep...
She had arrived in Pallet ,she saw a distinct black figure walk up to her. He had a trainers cap, black hair and eyes. She almost began fleeing. But that was from a distance, slowly, it was revealed that this was none other than Pallet Town's favorite son! He was moving his arms forward for a hug.
"Ash!", she said, falling into his arms.
"I've been waiting for you!" Replied the raven haired trainer.
They slowly moved closer to each other's lips...
A loud blast of a bell shook Dawn from her sweet dream.
"ATTENTION ALL PASSENGERS! WE ARE DOCKING IN PALLET TOWN. SO GATHER ALL YOUR BELONGINGS,CHILDREN,AND Pokémon!"
"Alright piplup! Let's go!"
After she had gathered all of her belongings,the blue haired coordinator stepped off the boat. She then proceeded to take in the atmosphere of the road to Pallet Town.
"Kinda like Twinleaf Town right piplup?"
Piplup clapped it's hands happily saying,
"Pip pip,piplup!"
Dawn then ran her fastest to the house of Ash Ketchum.
Ash sat on his bed,still thinking of yesterday's had talked to his mom. he told her everything. Why he liked her. Why he probably wouldn't have a chance. The talk actully worsened the situation as nostalgia kicked in. The poor raven haired trainer couldn't stop thinking one had lost her,he just couldn't get over it. There was no way over the hump of sadness. Even talking with his old rival,Gary, made it worse. He turned on his TV to try to lighten his mood. But no, it was a replay of a contest battle between Dawn and Kenny. This made him even more in the gloomy mood.A ring on his poketch shook him from his melancholy thinking. It was brock!
"Hey brock!"
"Hello old buddy,so tell me, what've you been doing?",asked the breeder.
"Battling!",the aspiring Pokémon master lied.
"Is that so?Well,let's just say, I've got a little surprise coming in from the sinnoh reigon!"
"Oh what is it?! Can you give me any clues?",Asked Ash hoping it was what he so desperately wanted.
"Well, it's blue and something you probably will enjoy."
"Thanks.",said Ash, thinking it was a piplup.
Brock grinned at Ash's unknowing thanks and said,
"Ring me again when it gets there!"
"No problem Brock."
"Alright take care now!"
"Bye.",said Ash,clearly saddened. He was perked up by the mention of sinnoh. But to him, he didn't think it was a human, specifically his favorite,He just sat on his bed awaiting the "surprise"
She hadn't run for long until she was in Pallet Town. It had taken what,15 minuets? It probably had taken longer, but she was just to wrapped up in thinking about him. Excitement found its way into her heart, which had been dormant yesterday. She arrived, and slowly knocked in the door...
sorry! Gonna end it there. They'll meet next chapter I promise!
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Post by shiny.pikachu on Nov 29, 2014 1:50:31 GMT
Here's the longest chapter!
There was a knock on the door of the Ketchum residence. Ash hadn't done much but sulk the last two days. Three words kept repeating in his mind, you lost her, you lost her, they constantly taunted him. He had a sense of depression almost, swirling about him. He put his mind in such a mellow state, Pikachu couldn't calm him. He remembered Brock's package and mumbled,
"Must be the package..."
He opened the door to something even more beautiful than he expected. This made those two days of sulking worth it! This certain person had blue hair, colored like a waterfall, that he just adored. Those cerulean eyes that he grew to love. As well as the iconic smile that always seemed to make his mind race. She wore a minidress, which made her look even more jaw dropping, the blue haired coordinator was shocked. Ash was so much more handsome than the last time she saw him (which was only two days.) his chocolate brown eyes that had urged her on so many times in the midst of combat were on full display, much to her liking. She didn't have time for wanted to hug him. Maybe even make her move. Pikachu and piplup were the first to move. Coming to each other and giving a brotherly high five. The two humans however, didn't speak move, or even breath. After a minuete or so, Ash started, saying,
"H-H-H-I-I- D-a-a-w-"
That was all that escaped the trainer's mouth as the coordinator tackle hugged him. Letting her emotion pour out into the hug. The hug to both teens had a sense of longing and love. That made the hug just as magical to both. Ash returned the hug,full force as the pair lied on the ground in a massive hug, never wanting to get out of each other's arms.
"Ash, your finally here, with me! Hopefully, you'll be with me in another sense, too!, she thought giddily.
"You came!", Ash whispered in her ear.
"Well I couldn't stay away from my best friend!
She was fully aware she had a lot of friends. But to her, Ash was always her favorite, thus making him her best friend. This was pretty much the same status with the boy.
Dawn piped up and said "Ash I have to tell you . I lo-"
She was cut off as the elder Ketchum was staring at the two, then she said,
"When can I expect grandchildren?"
The two teens came off each other and blushed a deeper red than a ruby!
"Welcome to our residence, Dawn. I guess I'll leave the option to you, do you want the guest bed or-"
"I don't think I'll need it." She said with a wild red blush.
"Are you sure?"
"No need to worry!", said the younger girl.
" well I'll leave you two to it then!", she said as she came out to the garden.
"Guess, it's just you and me,Dawn.", he said with a cheery smile on his face.
She smirked and said,
"Your happy about that? I wonder why?"
This made the raven haired teen blush again, not from the words, just simply by looking at her.
"Man she looks cute in that miniskirt!", he said, in thought of course.
But while he was in dreamland, he was just looking at Dawn absently
"Earth to Ash!"
The trainer looked up, and blushed again,saying
"sorry, I just can't believe your here!"
"Neither can I.", the coordinator thought, aloud
Luckily, as Ash was about to open his mouth to speak, she stuck her hand up in the air. They high fived which distracted Ash from what she had said.
"Oh yeah, gotta call Brock for something, 'scuse me Dawn!"
He rang the aspiring doctor, as soon as the line was connected he said
"DAWN WAS THE PACKAGE!?"
"Yeah, that's what it was!", said Brock, grinning. He somehow got dense and thickheaded Ash an opportunity to get a girl!
"How can I thank you Brock?"
"Just make sure you get her!"
With that, he ended the call
"What if she doesn't like me?", Ash thought aloud. He hadn't really made his move yet. And quite frankly, Dawn didn't ether.
"Kids! Bedtime!", called Delia Ketchum.
"I'll do it tonight for sure.", both Ash and Dawn thought.
The pair walked up to Ash's room, after saying good night to Delia.
Ash decided that the best time would be now, simultaneously, Dawn thought the same thing too.
"Hey Dawn!", asked Ash.
"What is it?"
" I've gotta tell you something important!"
"Me too, Ash but you go first."
Secretly, Dawn was thinking
"Is he going to confess?"
"Well Dawn, I love you. If you don't feel the same, it's ok. I just wanted to-."
He was interrupted by the bluenette's lips against his. Ash's shock turned into happiness as the feelings of both teens to each other were put in the kiss. Dawn broke away, much to the dismay of Ash.
"Does that answer your question?"
Ash was speechless. The girl of his dreams had kissed him. Never in a million years he'd think this would happen!
"Guess we'd better get ready for bed." Said Ash.
He got out the inflatable bed, but Dawn said
"We don't need that."
"Why?", asked Ash,obviously a stranger to love.
"Well I get nightmares. Plus I want to sleep with you, your my boyfriend right?", she said with a sheepish grin.
The boy blushed, almost to the point where his entire face was red.
"I guess so."
Meanwhile,outside, a pair of eyes was watching.
"That dumb boy Ash Ketchum thinks he can take MY girl? Fat chance! Dawn's mine! If I beat him already, why does he deserve her?! I'll find a way to split them up! I know I will! She belongs with me, not some halfwitted idiot like him!"
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Hoenn Champion
Somehow all these problems keep on landing on Me
Posts: 656
OTP: Saber X Shirou.
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
MBTI: ENFP
Badass Punchline: Nice Watch. Too bad I’ll have to break it. Break your face that is.
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Post by shiny.pikachu on Nov 30, 2014 5:58:21 GMT
Also, should I make the chapters shorter and more frequent or longer but slower?
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