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Post by IceArceus on Mar 13, 2014 13:15:00 GMT
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Post by thedarkwolf01 on May 23, 2014 11:34:37 GMT
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Post by Blackscorpion2 on May 29, 2014 16:10:27 GMT
(I just saw your distress call now T^T Sorry for not helping earlier!) Hmm...good story, it has a nice concept to it. However, I'll like to point out that the length of each chapter could be further increased if you go into a little in-depth emotional detail or make the characters have more longer and heart-touching conversations. You could try out an injured man who's almost unconscious knock at their door in order to stop them from confessing too soon. The man faints before saying anything and the others help him recover. Till then, you could publish a chapter focusing on the Pokémon interacting with each other to add a little change in your story but remember that Pokémon aren't as emotional as humans are. The man can have many things to say when he wakes up. You could make him send Ash and Dawn on an adventure to save the legendary Sinnoh trio or on a quest to find a rare relic that leads to the distortion realm where Giritina is on a rampage. If you want to add May into this story then I suggest you characterize the man as an aura guardian and send Ash on a mission to Hoenn at the 'tree of beginning' but Dawn will come along too because of her concern for Ash's well-being. You can direct your story anywhere if you want, it depends on the genre you want to focus on. If it's adventure romance then I suggest you use the legendary trio theme.
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