Post by sirus7009 on Aug 4, 2018 8:16:42 GMT
another old fic of mine. i planned to make a third chapter with a lemon in it but i lost interest. going back and reading it has given me some thoughts on finally finishing it, but i shudder at how out of character i made May in the first chapter, so maybe editing some things first might help....
i would love some feedback on it if anyone is willing. also, ignore the tsukasa/karen stuff in the beginning, it was a phase i was going through, and ignore the bit with the two OCs.... this was written when i was trying to make an oc adventure in johto and i stuck them in for.... some reason. it's an old fic, i don't remember haha.
www.fanfiction.net/s/5924585/1/Keep-The-Faith
P.s. ignore the last names of dawn and may. This was made waaay before the fanbase fully established maple and berlitz as the anime last names so i had made my own back then.
i would love some feedback on it if anyone is willing. also, ignore the tsukasa/karen stuff in the beginning, it was a phase i was going through, and ignore the bit with the two OCs.... this was written when i was trying to make an oc adventure in johto and i stuck them in for.... some reason. it's an old fic, i don't remember haha.
www.fanfiction.net/s/5924585/1/Keep-The-Faith
P.s. ignore the last names of dawn and may. This was made waaay before the fanbase fully established maple and berlitz as the anime last names so i had made my own back then.
need a break from that. I cannot express how much more I appreciate fan-translations of anything now