Post by sirus7009 on Aug 4, 2018 8:05:29 GMT
ok, first of all, i wish i knew about this place YEARS ago. thank god for the author of Ash and Dawn Together mentioning this site.
the link leads to what i used to see as my pride and joy, the best i've ever created.... except it's almost a decade old and i have changed a lot in how i write... was wondering if anyone would take a look and critique it and let me know if i should just patch some things to make it more literate and up to date (and make some Out of character moments... less out of character. ugh), or just outright rewrite the whole thing from the ground up. thanks ahead of time everyone ;w;
also, warning, it's long. and it's rate M for sexual content and for language. and also ignore the tsukasa karen junk. old phase i went through, and i just haven't gotten around to editing it out...
www.fanfiction.net/s/5898439/1/As-Time-Passes-and-Distance-Widens-Love-Grows
the link leads to what i used to see as my pride and joy, the best i've ever created.... except it's almost a decade old and i have changed a lot in how i write... was wondering if anyone would take a look and critique it and let me know if i should just patch some things to make it more literate and up to date (and make some Out of character moments... less out of character. ugh), or just outright rewrite the whole thing from the ground up. thanks ahead of time everyone ;w;
also, warning, it's long. and it's rate M for sexual content and for language. and also ignore the tsukasa karen junk. old phase i went through, and i just haven't gotten around to editing it out...
www.fanfiction.net/s/5898439/1/As-Time-Passes-and-Distance-Widens-Love-Grows
need a break from that. I cannot express how much more I appreciate fan-translations of anything now