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Okay, round 2 now.
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Badass Punchline: Some choose to destroy. Others choose to create. Some aid the light. Other ally with darkness, As for myself, I walk the line between the two.
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Post by knightofbalance on Jan 1, 2016 7:03:05 GMT
Sea of Imagination
Oh, Wondrous sea, as vast as a synapse
As deep as the human mind.
We barely tip our toes in your waters
Feeling just the smallest of bit of your warmth.
But those who can appreciate you
drift along your waves nice and smooth
Letting the sublime feeling of your warmth and rhythm
wash over them like music
And yet, there are depths no man
Brave or foolish enough to stare into
Where great and terrible beasts, akin to the demons of old,
Lurk, awaiting to snap up any they see.
Even with this weighed in my mind,
I will always take any chance to drift along your red and golden waves.
What do you think?
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Post by IceArceus on Jan 1, 2016 16:38:53 GMT
knightofbalance that's great! Love the imagery. I wouldn't title the thread "attempt at a poem" because it is more like a mastery of a poem. Judging by your profile...are you feeling poetic?
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Hoenn Elite
Okay, round 2 now.
Posts: 389
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
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Badass Punchline: Some choose to destroy. Others choose to create. Some aid the light. Other ally with darkness, As for myself, I walk the line between the two.
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Post by knightofbalance on Jan 1, 2016 19:39:41 GMT
knightofbalance that's great! Love the imagery. I wouldn't title the thread "attempt at a poem" because it is more like a mastery of a poem. Judging by your profile...are you feeling poetic? Thanks. This is like my third poem ever and I'm glad It turned out good. And yes, I'm feeling a little emotional with Nova's moving on. He was one of the first people to greet me here and one of my favorite people here. Seeing him leave is...hard. The poem above is about a place a go to where I am feeling especially emotional or creative and I thought it might be interesting to talk about so I brought it here. |
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Badass Punchline: A lone warrior surviving hundreds of battles, when it comes to losing, I'm the strongest.
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Post by PlatinumSun on Jan 1, 2016 19:44:47 GMT
I think its lovely. Better than most of my poems.
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Hoenn Elite
Okay, round 2 now.
Posts: 389
Shipping Allegiance: Pearlshipping
MBTI: INFP
Badass Punchline: Some choose to destroy. Others choose to create. Some aid the light. Other ally with darkness, As for myself, I walk the line between the two.
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Post by knightofbalance on Jan 1, 2016 19:46:15 GMT
I think its lovely. Better than most of my poems. Thank you |
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Somehow all these problems keep on landing on Me
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Post by shiny.pikachu on Jan 1, 2016 19:59:35 GMT
Nice!
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need a break from that. I cannot express how much more I appreciate fan-translations of anything now