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Post by Nafsika on Mar 1, 2017 22:43:13 GMT
Yes Sabrina is realy strong!!! To be honest the first time I watched the episodes with her I was so scared I just wanted them to end!!!! But you approch her character with a nice and more lighting way!!! And I liked the fact that Ash didn't share with Dawn Sabrina's past!!! His thoughts was gentel as ever!!!
Ah that explains a lot!!! I thought that because we have seen Noctowl to beat that gosts in Jotoh then he's a psychic Pokémon so I take your word about that!!! I realy have no clue about Pokémon abilities!!!
Yes you're right about that!!! Ash isn't as arrogant as he used to be when he started his travel and I realy like that change in him!!! And I understand that you put that scene so he had some character developement!!! And at the same time you show him to get upset when Surge courted Dawn!!! I laughted so much on this scenes!!!!
Awesome I like her!!! She seems nice!!! It reminds a little bite Saywer from XY and XYZ!!! Would she have a relashionship with Dawn like teacher-student or friend-rival??? I can see Dawn to be examplar for someone!!!! It would be good for her character!!!!
I realy can't wait to see them on action!!! I have understand that they're planing to do something similar with what they did in Unova!!! That's my theory but please don't spoil it so I will keep reading and we continue to discuss it!!!!
Ah what a pity!!! That could be fun!!! I like Jigglybuff especialy when she gets angry because no one listen to her song!!! She is so cute!!!!
There's no need to thank me!!! You deserve the congratulations for your hard work!!!! Your story is realy good and interesting!!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Mar 1, 2017 23:15:14 GMT
Yeah, she deserves redemption after coming back from the state she was in.
Right! Noctowl knows Foresight, which can let it hit ghost types.
Yeah lol, Ash doesn't take that kind of thing well. Frankly, it's pretty creepy on Surge's part, but that's an established part of his character.
Yeah, it is a bit like Sawyer! I guess it's a mix of both! Ciara really looks up to Dawn and Ash, if you ask me Dawn's a bit like a big sister to her, or at least she will be as the story goes on! You'll see.
Dawn learns what it's like to be a mentor in this story.
I'll keep my mouth zipped on Team Rocket! You'll see.
Yeah haha Jigglypuff is adorable.
I'm so glad you think so! I'll be ready for your next review.
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Post by Nafsika on Mar 2, 2017 1:41:36 GMT
When you posted the link for your story I said to myself <<Give it a chance go and read it>>!!! I thought that would be something small and without Pokémon because most of the funfic I have read is like that and then I saw that your story had 63 chapters and I was like <<What???>>!!!! When I start reading I couldn't believe that I find a story close enough to original!!! It was so satisfying!!!! I couldn't stop myself for reading!!! It was like meeting with a friend who was missing for so long!!! So be sure that I will be there when the story ends and I will demand for more chapters!!!! No need to worry!!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Mar 2, 2017 2:24:19 GMT
Yeah, I always find it hard to grasp how Pokémon stories have no Pokémon haha. Unless it is a short oneshot, like you said.
Thank you!! Wow, those are some really nice things to say about it, I appreciate it.
Well, there are plenty more coming! We're working on 68+69 now.
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Post by Nafsika on Mar 2, 2017 13:44:15 GMT
I mean it!!! Your work is realy impresive!!! Awesome!!! I have to start reading faster if I want to catch up with you!!! Thank you!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Mar 2, 2017 13:59:51 GMT
Haha, go for it, if you want! No problem!
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Post by Nafsika on Mar 12, 2017 23:53:08 GMT
I know I'm late but I realy couldn't let you wait anymore!!!! So this is what I think!!!! Tha chapter with the Gengar, Gustly and Haunter was amazing!!!! When I read it I couldn't believe it!!!! I haven't see that coming!!!! I liked the end when we lear that the Gengar tried to protect her children!!!! Danw's coordination was awesome as ever!!!! I like the way you make her so strong and confident!!! The move that Mamoswine used to win did he leard id from Ash's Glaine??? That scene was realy cool!!!! I was so surprised as Dawn's opponent!!!! Ash vs Bertha I don't have words that I can use to discribe my thoughts!!!! It was realy a very good and tough batlle!!!! For a moment I thought that Ash would beat her but you reminded me that he is not ready yet!!!! The surprise in this chapter was Dawn's gambling addiction!!!! I hope never seen that side of hers again!!! One time is enough!!! Bertha and Ash vs Team Rocket!!!!! Was good and tough!!! You have made them decend and realy strong!!! I like that!!!! And I bet my Harry Potter's books that you have made Giovanni to have planned something realy bad for Ash although I can't think what would that be!!! I guess I will figure out sooner or later!!!! And for the end of my review we have the battle between Ash and Erika!!!! You made Ash's Pokémon to fight realy hard but the best was Meganium!!!! I realy love her!!! In this chapter I laughed very mach with the teasing with Ash's first appirance and how Ash didn't want to discuss it infront of Dawn!!!! I realy loved the reading of those chapters!!!!I hope that your writing will keep surprice my like the chapter with the gosts Pokémon!!!! Those gosts are my favorite !!!Is there any chance to see them again? Keep up the good job!!!! And don't worry I'm not going to give up your story so easily!!! With your story I acting as a dog with a bone!!! I wont let it that easily!!! I promise!!!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Mar 13, 2017 0:49:15 GMT
First of all, thanks for another review! And I'm glad you liked the ghosts! We wanted to touch on shiny breeding and how harmful it'd really be
Yeah, Dawn's really settled herself as strong! And I don't remember to be honest haha This won't be the last you'll see of Quijote, either!
Thank you! Yeah, the real Team Rocket is no joke. And yes, you'll find out as you read!
Thank you! Meganium deserved a titular battle imo, especially since it was a grass gym. And yeah lol. He was embarrassed about sneaking in... Luckily, Dawn didn't really mind!
Aw, sadly that was a character of the day type chapter, but Haunter and Misdreavus are still around, so you'll see ghosts again, sooner or later!
Thank you! Haha, I believe you! I'm excited for more, too!
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Post by Nafsika on Mar 13, 2017 13:41:52 GMT
Don't mention it!!!! The gladness is all mine!!!! I'm glad to hear that we are going to see them again!!!! I realy love the trio of Gustly, Haunter and Gengar!!! Everytime we meet them in the anime they're awesome and so goofy!!!! I'm glad that I'm not going to lose my books!!!! I mustn't put bets like this!!! I like the new Team Rocket!!! I can't wait for what coming next!!!! Meganium is an nice and strong Pokémon and deserves to be under the spotlight!!!! Yes Dawn is realy strong but all those wins make me wonder when the lost is going to strike!!! It's not normal!!! Till now your story in this things have followed a patern!!!! Some battles the heroe wins them and in others he lost and Dawn till now has only win so when the lost is going to strike?
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Post by chosenone151 on Mar 13, 2017 15:20:01 GMT
Don't worry, you'll see, when it comes to Dawn! It was easy to have her win a lot since she's already experienced, but there's still plenty of time and contests left to win or lose!
The same goes for Ash haha, it's easy to have him do well. If you had to compare the characters in the story to the games, Ash has been facing opponents pretty much equal to the heartgold/soulsilver kanto gyms, so most of their Pokémon are levels 50-60, and Ash is around that range, if not a bit higher. His strongest, like Pikachu, Charizard, Sceptile, etc. are all a bit over those numbers. So, you can see why it'd be hard for him to lose!
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