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Post by Nafsika on Apr 18, 2017 18:56:17 GMT
Awesome I will wait for you!!! When you're ready come by there!!! Isn't so nice to know that you have friends that you can count on them to help you in the difficult moment???
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Post by chosenone151 on Apr 18, 2017 18:57:23 GMT
First of all, thanks to both of you! I appreciate you promoting the story Nafiska, and Maotelus, I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm looking forward to hearing your thoughts on it!
There's plenty of art for the story if you want to see it to accompany reading it!
Back on topic, you're right. That battle in the intro was really nice! I loved seeing them work together, and tag battling would show their bond well! I can't wait to see how much more compatible they get in battles.
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Post by Nafsika on Apr 18, 2017 20:02:49 GMT
Ah it's my pleasure!!! You know how much I love to read it, so I wouldn't lose an opportunity to advertise it to a new member!!! You are very kind sir and for that I thank you!!!
Even stronger, but first Dawn must capture more Pokémon so they can combinate more Pokémon moves!!!! That will heat up things even more!!!
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Post by Maotelus on Apr 18, 2017 20:05:54 GMT
I've finished now chapter 6 and I'll try to post my thoughts once I've finished chapter 10, I think by then I should have a basic knowledge for a little discussion. I've looked up the art for theses six Chapters and that look also really good. I always kinda admire well done arts, because I am terribly bad at drawing things. Yeah, it's truly nice if you have friend to count on in difficult moments, I'm pretty sure if Dawn and Ash had more battles like these, sometimes one of them could be clueless and out of ideas how to defeat their opponent, but then the other one can help them up. If my memory is right you have a moment that goes a lil' bit in that direction in the scene mentioned earlier.
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Post by chosenone151 on Apr 18, 2017 20:10:54 GMT
Sounds like a plan! And thanks, I'm glad you liked the art! I like being able to visualize what's going on, so I can't help but get that stuff together.
And yeah, drawing's really difficult.
I could definitely see that happening! They're both talented and creative, and I think that's their best asset in a match, both individually and as a team. Two heads are better than one, after all.
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Post by Nafsika on Apr 18, 2017 20:30:44 GMT
Ah I will have a companion to the crime!!! I was expecting so long for someone else to come and discuss chosenone's story with me!!! Finally my dream becomes true!!! A fan base discussion!!! Not that I complain with the opportunity to discuss the story with the writer, but with another fan we will make speculations and other stuff!!! What an awesome day!!!
They will be fine!!! They are too creative to have any problem!!! They will have fun and the same goes for their Pokémon!!! So no need to worry!!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Apr 18, 2017 20:43:28 GMT
I'm excited, myself! I think this would be a first haha
That's true! lol taking that right from Dawn, but it's true. I'm sure as they both get stronger there'll be more combinations, like you said! I can't wait for Dawn's team to evolve so they can do more of that. Like Buneary and Quilava!
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Post by Nafsika on Apr 18, 2017 21:38:11 GMT
Ah come on!!! You have a big fanbase on FunFiction!!! A lot of people follow you and expecting with anticipation for thn 70 chapter!!! So be strong and positive!!!
I would like to see Buneary evolved!!! And now that I remembered it, does Pachirichu has a second level evolution???
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Post by chosenone151 on Apr 18, 2017 22:55:38 GMT
Yeah, but to be honest a lot of people leave reviews that aren't really relevant to the chapter or even the story at all :/ it gets frustrating to not get to hear what people think of all of the work we've put in, so it can feel a little thankless sometimes.
It made me really happy to have your input! And I'll do my best!
I'm sure she'll evolve eventually! She is happy after all! And no sadly it doesn't.
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Post by Maotelus on Apr 18, 2017 23:13:24 GMT
Buneary and Lopunny are both nice Pokémon, and thinking about especially Dawn's Buneary I guess it'd be funny to see it as a Lopunny always trying to get close to Pikachu, 'cause Lopunny is a lil' bit taller than Pikachu and yeah.
About Pachirisu, the way I see it, a evolution isn't necessary, I mean it is cute Pokémon filled with more energy than some very big/tall Pokémon like Snorlax (yeah I know it's a bad example) or faster than for example a Furret. It also isn't weak and has some good moves, especially Dawn's Pachirisu has done some good work during certain contests.
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