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Post by Nafsika on Feb 27, 2017 17:59:03 GMT
Ah!!!! Are you close to finnish your story??? Are you trying to make me crt? Because I will!!!! Please don't!!!! I don't want it to end!!!! It's such a good story!!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Feb 27, 2017 23:02:56 GMT
It's not close to ending, don't worry! We're working on chapter 68, and I wouldn't be at all surprised if we pass 100 chapters.
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Post by PikaFUSION on Feb 28, 2017 0:55:34 GMT
No problem! Meanwhile, I'm working on later chapters now. Fic writing is hard work haha can relate
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Post by chosenone151 on Feb 28, 2017 1:12:40 GMT
No problem! Meanwhile, I'm working on later chapters now. Fic writing is hard work haha can relate I believe it. I'm typically only a chapter or two ahead of scheduled posting at anytime, it's a little nerve racking haha.
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Post by Nafsika on Feb 28, 2017 1:16:32 GMT
Ah!!!!! What a relief!!!! I'm glad to hear that you are not near the end!!! If you like make them and 200 it's fine with me because it would be a non-stop reading!!!! I couldn't ask for something better!!! So keep it up!!!!
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Post by Nafsika on Feb 28, 2017 1:19:13 GMT
I believe it. I'm typically only a chapter or two ahead of scheduled posting at anytime, it's a little nerve racking haha. Don't think it so much!!! Just write whatever your heart saying!!! You're doing great job!!!! Thank you for that!!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Feb 28, 2017 1:20:06 GMT
You're not caught up yet, but we only just got past the gym battles, and there's still pre-league, the league itself, and more! I appreciate the enthusiasm though haha Thanks! I hope you get to read more of it soon!
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Post by Nafsika on Feb 28, 2017 8:50:46 GMT
I will do I promise!!!!!
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Post by Nafsika on Mar 1, 2017 18:18:59 GMT
You will be glad to hear that I read a few chapters from your story!!!!! It's realy good!!!
The battle with Sabrina was intence!!!! And I liked the Pokémon Ash used!!! Buy it wouldn'n be better if he had used Noctowl instead of Crawdaunt??? I mean Noctowl is a psychic type Pokémon and it would had better chance against Alakazam!!!! At least is what I think I'm not expert but it's more logical!!!
Then the first battle with Surge ended ingloriously!!!! I'm not commplain!!! It's logical to lose in some points and that battle at the very beging was the tougher for Ash!!! It just a little annoying to watch him lose cause hiw arrogant!!! I thought he had passed that stage and he had mooved on!!! But the second was even better than anime's!!!!
Dawn's coontest was nice and it made me worried that she will lose in the end!!! That Ciara was realy tough!!!!
The chapter with the Team Rocket's member was funny and kinda predictable but it ok because we don;t want the bad guys to win in the fantacy world!!!
But the best chapter was that with Jigglypuff!!!! I was wondering if she will show up and here it is!!! Are we going to see her again??? It would be fun if Ash caught her!!!!
And the last chapter was with Gyrados!!! It was good and I liked the fact that it was Terry's Pokémon!!! For a moment I had the same thoughts as Dawn that Ash is going to catch it!!!! I liked this shift in the plot of the story!!!!
You are a genius in writing!!! Thank you for that!!!!
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Post by chosenone151 on Mar 1, 2017 18:43:18 GMT
Thanks so much!
Well, Noctowl's not actually a psychic type, it just knows psychic moves. And Crawdaunt is dark type, so it has an advantage! But, Sabrina planned for that, as we saw. She's no slouch!
Yeah, he's mostly past his arrogant stage, but it's a trait that tends to re-emerge in Ash every once in a while when he gets too strong for his own good, like with Ash-Greninja. But it'll happen less and less often, like how he learned his lesson there!
And I'm glad you liked the rematch!
Yeah, Ciara is talented! You'll be seeing more of her.
Haha yeah. Well, don't worry about that, because Team Rocket becomes much more formidable later on. You'll be surprised!
Aww yeah. I don't think Ash could handle being put to sleep all the time lmao
Thanks so much! I'm glad the twists and turns appeal to you!
You'll be seeing another familiar character, very soon!
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